Comments on: Fang & Bone: “12. The Gold Coin” https://hpkomics.com/2025/10/fang-bone-12-the-gold-coin/ A repository for what I wish to write and draw. Mon, 10 Nov 2025 07:57:16 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9 By: David https://hpkomics.com/2025/10/fang-bone-12-the-gold-coin/#comment-2504 Mon, 10 Nov 2025 07:57:16 +0000 https://hpkomics.com/?p=3498#comment-2504 In reply to Kevin Hayman.

He’s being bullied by a child. It’s a lot of fun.

]]> By: Kevin Hayman https://hpkomics.com/2025/10/fang-bone-12-the-gold-coin/#comment-2422 Mon, 03 Nov 2025 00:23:26 +0000 https://hpkomics.com/?p=3498#comment-2422 There’s something bizarrely wonderful about this interaction. I don’t know what it is, but I love it.

]]> By: Fang & Bone: “13. The Sad Tale of Donnel Gaerig” - hpkomics.com https://hpkomics.com/2025/10/fang-bone-12-the-gold-coin/#comment-2419 Sun, 02 Nov 2025 16:49:14 +0000 https://hpkomics.com/?p=3498#comment-2419 […] is the thirteenth chapter of the Fang & Bone serial; click here to visit the previous installment of Fang of Triseria. Please share your thoughts on the story in […]

]]> By: David https://hpkomics.com/2025/10/fang-bone-12-the-gold-coin/#comment-2372 Tue, 28 Oct 2025 01:36:59 +0000 https://hpkomics.com/?p=3498#comment-2372 In reply to Alizarin.

Thank you for letting me know. I hope you’ll enjoy the next chapter.

]]> By: Alizarin https://hpkomics.com/2025/10/fang-bone-12-the-gold-coin/#comment-2365 Mon, 27 Oct 2025 02:34:47 +0000 https://hpkomics.com/?p=3498#comment-2365 In reply to David.

No worries, happens to the best of us. Actually, just a couple of small things really. From Fang & Bone 3. Rot in the Air, about halfway down during the fight, “He raised his gigantic sword above his head and stepped forward, bringing the blade town on the closest ghoul.” Thought you probably meant “bringing the blade down on the closest ghoul.”

Also, in Fang & Bone 5. Ramshackle, also about halfway down, there was “The size of the Fang, however, drew enough attention on its own.” Fang is his name and I didn’t see “the Fang” anywhere else. Looks like everywhere else you just had “Fang” or “the wolf.” So it would probably be slightly less awkward and more consistent with “The size of the wolf” or “The size of Fang” there.

Thanks for sharing this! Looking forward to reading more.

]]> By: David https://hpkomics.com/2025/10/fang-bone-12-the-gold-coin/#comment-2359 Sun, 26 Oct 2025 20:54:03 +0000 https://hpkomics.com/?p=3498#comment-2359 In reply to Alizarin.

No matter how often I check these drafts something slips through, please let me know what you see.

Also, thanks for reading!

]]> By: Alizarin https://hpkomics.com/2025/10/fang-bone-12-the-gold-coin/#comment-2358 Sun, 26 Oct 2025 19:20:57 +0000 https://hpkomics.com/?p=3498#comment-2358 I was looking at public Mastodon feeds, was considering creating an account again, and found your story by chance. I noticed a few small typos, but I like the characters and your writing style, and I’m enjoying the story so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.

]]> By: Couch Gregor https://hpkomics.com/2025/10/fang-bone-12-the-gold-coin/#comment-2105 Sun, 05 Oct 2025 11:58:29 +0000 https://hpkomics.com/?p=3498#comment-2105 👻👻]]> Punctuation of the swears, werewolf and ghouls, narrative tension!

Woo! Thay build up of complications with Fang. 🛋👻👻

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